What style of vocals would you like on this track? If possible, give names of singers or bands you'd like the performance to sound similar to. Specifically Deathcore, like the epitome of what deathcore should sound like Brooke Reeves of Impending Doom and Saud Ahmed of The Crimson Armada.
Please provide me with a theme for any lyric writing you need. This is a requirement to start the process, as it speeds up the workflow.As well as that, any particular vocal techniques you'd like me to include?
First lyric line must include “Beloved Brethren” and breakdown wrath must include “Don’t you fucking hiss at me we are immune to your sorcery!!!!” But must remain overall a Christian song. Beloved Brethren (I have come to beg((no not beg change wording as an offering)) for mercy, my hands are tired, and these knees are weak Guilty as always I found an evil you seek A depth of darkness, (they call me a freak) I dare not speak They rape the children force the needle on the weak and force the needle on the meek they slaughter the innocent of whom you know I speak justice Wherefore, my beloved brethren, let every man be swift to hear, slow to speak, slow to wrath. James 1:19)
(Liar deceiver false witness malignant cancerous infectious snakes) “Don’t you Fucking hiss at me! We’re immune to your SORCERY!!” They shall take up serpents; and if they drink any deadly thing it shall not hurt them. Mark 16:18 the serpent was more crafty than any of the wild animals the LORD God had made genesis 3:1-5 adaptation The serpent was so crafty! John 8:44 We bow to no one! totalitarian ruler barbarian the land is full of giants a worthy sacrifice drank the souls of my beloved(he raped my entire family and continues to dig through my friends list raping everyone targeting)sanctity of the DXC (Christians). Burn the snakes let the dark rulers have their throne with grace for an blood bond Burn His witch Jezebel and her prophet “Challenge his throne!” we are born of darkness this man is loyal to no one I will not proselytize you. I choose evil of my own free will! These are not darkened souls he brings these are the innocent children for into the terrors we hold. how is it that Satan has so filled your heart that you have lied to the Holy Spirit- adaptation of Acts 5:3 I am afraid that just as Eve was deceived by the serpent’s cunning, your minds may somehow be led astray from your sincere adaptation of 2 Corinthians 11:3 And in this mountain shall the Lord of hosts make unto all people a feast of fat things, a feast of wines on the lees, of fat things full of marrow, of wines on the lees well refined. Isaiah 25:6 choice meats an offering Jezebel and her prophet.
“Nevertheless, I have this against you: You tolerate that woman Jezebel, who calls herself a prophet. By her teaching she misleads my servants into sexual immorality and the eating of food sacrificed to idols. I have given her time to repent of her immorality, but she is unwilling Revelation 2:20-23
So for the Strange Fire song It’s simply me the owner of The Metalcore Church legally in the State of California asking the Deathcore community to allow me to have the keys to the Christian Deathcore community basically add the link to the Deathcore church in the basement of the metalcore church’s website. Jezebel is America sleeping with pornography and her prophet is the addict prostitute. The bad guy I’m asking for justice against is leader of the woods Chad some white supremacist in Oildale who rapes women and pushes the needle on them. There is also a large community of gangsters here pushing the needle on the specifically beautiful girls at Foothill Highschool known as the Weed Patch gang any analogy asking the Deathcore community for justice against gangsters raping underage girls is my plea in the song Strange Fire. Hopefully this helps direct the song better.
The name of the song Strange Fire come from Leviticus 10:1 where Nadab and Abihu (analogy token for Chad and A South Side Crip who tried to steal my car while I was drunk on October 23rd) were burning the incense with fire of their own making rather than taking fire from the altar, as specified in Leviticus 16:12. Or it could have been that the two men came into the tabernacle drunk and therefore could not remember what was a violation and what was not (Leviticus 10:8–9). Whatever it was the men did to render the offering profane, it was a sign of their disregard for the utter holiness of God and the need to honor and obey Him in solemn and holy fear. Their carelessness and irreverence were their downfall.
I’m actually really going through it lately. I really need this song to be that much more serious. People really do be antagonizing me to pull the trigger on them. I have this saying about playing stupid games and winning stupid prizes. I need to turn up the heat. I really think it looks good some changes I would make are *Serpents whisper* laced with deceit. Just add the s on the end of serpent, and term reconsideration for the word Willful. I need to include statements about Jezebel and her prophet, that witch has betrayed us all or similar terminology. I also want Nadab and abihu your irreverent disrespect towards the holiness of God… Today you have lied to the Spirit will join your family adaptation of Acts Ananias and sapphira story where they drop dead lying to the church.
No I changed my mind about willful the definition is accurate vocabulary, but Cancerous Deceivers, Malignant and Shameless**
Rapist is too strong of an accusation. Raping is just on the wheel they spin when they do evil it is more like every time they get into a position of great gain they spin the wheel of evil sometimes it lands on murder rape pillage infiltrate steal break in etc.
Thank you man I really appreciate it. My guy on TikTok Chiclovesyou said he would shoot me a line. He is also a fan of Christian Deathcore and his platform supports the community.
Then we have to bring it back to Genesis 24 blessings and the curses to end the song.
Yeah, rapists is a difficult stake in the wording. Change it to corrupt that's fine I wanted to change the whole line to Cancerous Deceivers, malignant and shameless but let's use both I'm not sure if this is being speed read or like two stanza bars. We are going to need quiet a few more bars to finish the song. That second line is killing me, I demand your attention. I need a call to arms on the second line, but also request. No demand, I'ma get punched in the face demanding anything from the Deathcore Community 😅
Jezebel, the wicked queen, and wife to the evil King Ahab had a reputation for murder, iniquity, and sexual promiscuity. She not only served as a thorn in the side of the prophet Elijah, but she also led Israel astray in their foreign worship of idols (1 Kings 18).
You Prey* on the undeserving faultless**
Chorus: Serpents of Corruption** Wicked and sinful (wicked and evil)**the weak(The innocent*innocent of evil having committed no crime forced into meth orgies having never even had sex within a stable relationship being thrust into the arms of wicked men and exposed to the atrocities associated with drug addicted sexual immoralities developed over years of drug use)**
They break down must have if I remove the Don't you fucking hiss at me and make it more Christian so to say it would need to read... Don't Hiss at me with the double meaning speech I'll rip out your tounge with that serpents tounge speech yes that sound bad ass!! 🙌🤘
"Don't you hiss at me with that double meaning speech you filthy snakes! We'll rip out your tounge and that serpents tounge speech!!!"
I'm really wrestling with the don't you fucking hiss at me....it must be expounded on in the initial breakdown.
My brothers(Beloved)**you will never stand alone.
"You poured His blood on the mercy seat you released the Spirit that live in me. We will never see defeat" or something like that with the Choice meat scripture adaptation
Wait, the chorus that comes after the Jezebel verse needs to stay how you've written it but every other occurrence needs to read Serpents of Corruption, wicked and Evil..
It's the other way around:
Serpents of corruption, wicked and evil, Your filth will no longer be tolerated You prey on the willful and fearful The innocent shall not longer be dominated.
Then the second chorus after mentioning Jezebel
Liars, corrupt(I forget the original word placed here), wicked and sinful revert this section back to the way it was first written "" "" ""
So for the breakdown make sure it's plural for snakes with an S because there are a lot of grown ass dudes practicing this language everyday. The higher the vocabulary the easier to rob people who can't comprehend. Also whisper needs to be singular it will ring better will the song.
Now Nadab and Abihu, the sons of Aaron, each took his censer and put fire in it and laid incense on it and offered unauthorized fire before the LORD, which he had not commanded them. And fire came out from before the LORD and consumed them, and they died before the LORD. (Lev. 10:1–2)
On the Kingdoms quake verse the correction there should be “My Beloved” it’s a term used among the prophets when God is addressing you personally.
Okay, for the Nadab and Abihu switch liars and corruption for the two names in that last Chorus so it shows possession. Of the crimes.
My last input would be that instead of a random growl can you do a two tone WAR!!!!!! Maybe anytime you do the long gowl make sure it's like an unrecognizable war.
I found an issue in the lyrics when you get a chance I need the breakdown changed. Don't you hiss at me with that "Serpents Tongue" Speech you filthy fucking snakes! make sure the word snakes has an "s" at the end in the way you sing it. I need "double meaning" speech removed.
Man, this is getting too good. I started thinking the track was about me for a second and then I realized I wrote the song 😆. I can already feel the spiritual heat being turned up and I haven’t even released this song yet. Damn, this is so good tho. That Jezebel part is fantastic. I’ve literally memorized the song already I’ve listened to it so many times.
Beloved brethren,
This is a call to arms,
My resolve has never been stronger,
The darkness tempts me but holds me no longer,
Pride has befallen the son of dawn,
Sent below to the abyss of dejected souls,
The serpents whispers laced with deceit,
They guide the worthy to be betrayed.
Chorus:
Serpents of corruption, wicked and evil,
Your filth will no longer be tolerated
You prey on the wilful and fearful
The innocent will no longer be dominated.
Kingdoms quaked and trembled in his wake,
Our strength is not something he can break,
Shield yourself in faith and challenge his throne,
My beloved you will never stand alone.
War!
Cancerous deceivers, malignant and shameless,
Just like the wicked Jezebel, the licentious
Profane His honour and front that you're blameless,
I won't let you hide amongst the faithless.
Chorus:
Liars, corruption, wicked and sinful,
Your filth will no longer be tolerated,
You pray on the wilful and fearful
The weak shall no longer be dominated.
Don't you hiss at me with that serpents tongue
speech you filthy fucking snakes!
You poured His blood on the mercy seat
you released the Spirit that lives in me.
We will never see defeat!
And we take this cup in remembrance of the blood that was shed for us
and we take this bread in remembrance of his body that was broken for us
Chorus:
Nadab and Abihu, wicked and unrighteous,
You will burn for your disobedience,
This retribution will be swift and just,
Your contrition shall be your penance.
Your contrition shall be your penance.
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